You’re onto something, Seething.

Righto Seethin, you’re in double figures so I’ll give you my unsolicited opinion.

1. Draw. You’re not drawing, you’re just subbing in text. You need to develop style, visual shorthand, characters, the relationship between anthropomorphic art and ideas.
2. Simplify. #s 7, 8, 9, 10 could fit their concepts into a single panel.
3. Drop the superscript pithy affirmations such as lately. If you’ve got a message, then work it into a new episode.

That was good