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Bumtree #10

by Seething

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GreyRanga
GreyRanga
May 10, 2024 12:07 pm

You’re onto something, Seething.

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Bruce of Newcastle
Bruce of Newcastle
May 10, 2024 12:18 pm

He’s nesting.

Monty Python Flying Sheep Sketch

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Wally Dalí
Wally Dalí
May 10, 2024 12:38 pm

Righto Seethin, you’re in double figures so I’ll give you my unsolicited opinion.

  1. Draw. You’re not drawing, you’re just subbing in text. You need to develop style, visual shorthand, characters, the relationship between anthropomorphic art and ideas.
  2. Simplify. #s 7, 8, 9, 10 could fit their concepts into a single panel.
  3. Drop the superscript pithy affirmations such as lately. If you’ve got a message, then work it into a new episode.
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Perplexed of Brisbane
Perplexed of Brisbane
May 10, 2024 4:42 pm

Pay that one

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Carpe Jugulum
Carpe Jugulum
May 10, 2024 4:57 pm

That was good

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  3. Zaf, that’s the lame and gay “people of Springfield” tune by some soy douche. This is the original house banger.…

  5. Roads, rates and rubbish. Or not (the Tele): Clover Moore’s City of Sydney council will donate $22,000 to Rising Tide…

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