Bumtree #10


by Seething

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GreyRanga
GreyRanga
May 10, 2024 12:07 pm

You’re onto something, Seething.

Bruce of Newcastle
Bruce of Newcastle
May 10, 2024 12:18 pm
Wally Dalí
Wally Dalí
May 10, 2024 12:38 pm

Righto Seethin, you’re in double figures so I’ll give you my unsolicited opinion.

  1. Draw. You’re not drawing, you’re just subbing in text. You need to develop style, visual shorthand, characters, the relationship between anthropomorphic art and ideas.
  2. Simplify. #s 7, 8, 9, 10 could fit their concepts into a single panel.
  3. Drop the superscript pithy affirmations such as lately. If you’ve got a message, then work it into a new episode.
Perplexed of Brisbane
Perplexed of Brisbane
May 10, 2024 4:42 pm

Pay that one

Carpe Jugulum
Carpe Jugulum
May 10, 2024 4:57 pm

That was good

  1. The Washington Post headline read “Australian hospital examines patient records after nurse claims to have killed Israelis.” Hope the search…

  2. Rita Panahi: Australia is again making headlines around the world for all the wrong reasons thanks to another anti-Semitic incident.To…

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